Contents Page Final

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I have acted upon my ways forward by correcting all the spelling errors and number mistakes, i have made the editors letter more readable as well as the magazine date. I have added a background to make the font stand out more so that the reader can focus more on the text. My features give the reader enough information to know what is in this issue but not enough so that they want to read through the pages to find out more. The editors letter is relateable to the audience so that they feel like someone is talking to them in an informal manor.

Reflection: The background colours and neon theme have improved


  • Ways Forward: 
  • Making the background black so its more cohesive 
  • Formatting the text so that it looks more structured 
  • Editing the editor's letter so it has a sign in and sign off 

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